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 +Codenummer: PointOfView.PictureNumber.Actionplate.SubActionPlate(G=PureGrafik, LA=LiveAction)
 +Example:
 +#P13.25.b (LA) = Pings Point of View, Picture 13, Action 25b (probably some subclip to explain something in more detail), Life Action
 +#AB25.105 = Azreal and Big Fishs Point of View, Picture 25, Action 105
 +#B30.39(G) = Big Fishs Point of View, Picture 30, Action 39, Purely Graphic
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==Act 0 - Title and Establishing Scene== ==Act 0 - Title and Establishing Scene==
====O0.1==== ====O0.1====
-We are opening the movie with a flight from way above into the divided city of Berlin (in a map/3D style) in the year 2028. One half is very green while the other is white and only has sparse green spots here and there. All the surrounding land is absolutely green with white spots resembling corporate greenhouses here and there (that are huge).+The movie opens with a flight from high above, into the divided city of Berlin(in a map/3D style) The year is 2028. One half is very green and the other white with sparse spots of greenery here and there. The surrounding land is absolutely green with white spots dotted about, resembling huge corporate greenhouses.
====O0.2==== ====O0.2====
-We then see the "white" side - its huge clean structures blink up and the text "Bayeonia" comes into view.+The next shot shows the 'white' side, its huge clean structures blink up, and the text 'Bayeonia' comes into view.
====O0.3==== ====O0.3====
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====O0.5==== ====O0.5====
-people in corporate dress working like robots show up (maybe intercut with robots). +people in corporate clothing, working like robots are seen(maybe intercut with robots).
====O0.6==== ====O0.6====
-We cut back to the top view of the city this time the "Berlin" (so the anarchic) side blinks. +We cut back to the top view of the city, this time 'Berlin' (so the anarchic side blinks).
====O0.7==== ====O0.7====
-The picture freezes gets a little noisier and zooms out to reveal that it is a video shown on a floating screen.+The picture freeze frames, getting noisier, and zooms out to reveal it is a video showing on a floating screen.
==Act 1 - Protagonist Introduction== ==Act 1 - Protagonist Introduction==
===Ping's point of view=== ===Ping's point of view===
====P1.1==== ====P1.1====
-Going further backward with the camera moving away from the beginning poster performance we see Pings arm with the interface to control the floating screen. Camera moving more backward and slightly sideward shows Ping. Looking away from the screen to her right she gets distracted by a beautiful butterfly sitting on a flower just in front of her (she is sitting in the gras). She watches it for a couple of seconds as it then flies off into the sky. Ping looks after it until dissapears. +Retreatin further, the camera shot moving away from the beginning 'poster performance', we see Ping's arm which has an interface to control the floating screen. The camera moves further back and slightly sidewards, to show Ping seated on the grass, looking away from the screen to her right, distracted by a beautiful butterfly on a flower in front of her for some moments before it flies upwards. She watches it till it dissapears from sight.
====P1.2==== ====P1.2====
-With her thumb she is fiddling with the [[tattooed interface]] on her arm (stroking it upward downward) we see the butterfly and the flower as it would be seen from Pings point of view on the floating screen. Then she rubs her finger to the left over her arm and we see the last bit of the poster sequence of the beginning. +She is fiddling with the [[tattooed interface]] on her arm (stroking it upward downward). We see the butterfly and the flower as it would be seen from Ping's point of view, on the floating screen. Then she rubs her finger to the left over her arm, and we see the last bit of the poster sequence from the beginning.
====P1.3==== ====P1.3====
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====P1.6==== ====P1.6====
-pushes another time on a different part of her arm - her signature appears on the floating screen "PING propaganda for a better world" ''(or such I have to find a better slogan or a good logo (banksy comes to mind)!!!)''. She then rubs her thumb (closeup) again and we see the whole sequence play from the part where the anarchic side blinks to the butterfly to her signature. Happy with her work she turns off the screen that swirls into a black tiny thing implanted on her arm (again touch her tattooed interface) takes the chip that is magnetically attached to a different part on her arm and gets up.+pushes again on a different part of her arm, where her signature appears on the floating screen 'PING propaganda for a better world' ''(or some such. I have to find a better slogan or a good logo Banksy comes to mind!!!)''. She again rubs her thumb (closeup), and the whole sequence plays from where the anarchic side blinks, to the butterfly, and then her signature. Happy with her work, she turns off the screen which swirls into a black tiny thing implanted on her arm. She again touches her tattooed interface, takes the chip that is magnetically attached to a different part on her arm, and gets up.
===Az's point of view=== ===Az's point of view===
====A27.1==== ====A27.1====
-Closeup on Azraels Feet with [[Azraels Shoes]] which are on some kind of elevation (concrete block or a railing or such) with a blurry street in the background. His Hand comes into view and he slides his finger over the side of the shoes and while he rubs his finger along in one direction the shoe"laces" are tying closer making the shoes fit better.+Closeup on Azraels Feet with [[Azraels Shoes]] which are on some kind of elevation (concrete block or railing, or such) with a blurry street in the background. His Hand comes into view, and he slides his finger over the sides of the shoes. When he rubs his finger in one direction, the shoe 'laces' are tying closer, making the shoes fit better.
====A27.2==== ====A27.2====
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====A27.3==== ====A27.3====
-does other warm ups (decided on location like jumping up and down a little etc etc). +does other warm ups (decided when on location, like jumping up and down a little, etc).
====A27.4==== ====A27.4====
-Then he practices a jump over a railing or some other obstacle a couple of times. Then jogs off into some alleyway.+He practices a jump over a railing or other obstacle a couple of times, then jogs off into an alleyway.
===Big Fish's point of view=== ===Big Fish's point of view===
-====Szene B36.1(G&LA)====+====B36.1(G&LA)====
-We see a swarm of [[nanobots]] assembling themself into some kind of iris lookalike structure. The structure slowly zooms out until we see that the nanobots where visible on a floating screen and that the screen is attached to some strange structure that resembles a electron microscope thingy. The outline of Big Fish backlit by the screen comes into view. +We see a swarm of [[nanobots]] assembling themself into some kind of iris-lookalike structure. The structure slowly zooms out until we see that the nanobots where visible on a floating screen and the screen is attached to some strange structure that resembles a electron microscope. The outline of Big Fish backlit by the screen comes into view.
-====Szene B36.2====+====B36.2====
His hands fiddle with his [[nanobot collecting pen]] which he places on the glowing bit (which has a premade hole) of the tunnel microscope (lower part). His hands fiddle with his [[nanobot collecting pen]] which he places on the glowing bit (which has a premade hole) of the tunnel microscope (lower part).
-====Szene B36.3====+====B36.3====
closeup closeup
The pen fills up (visible by a transparent part of the pen that starts glowing more and more). The pen fills up (visible by a transparent part of the pen that starts glowing more and more).
-====Szene B36.4====+====B36.4====
close/halbnahe -> He grabs the pen close/halbnahe -> He grabs the pen
-====Szene B36.5====+====B36.5====
-halbtotale - then moves over to his experimentation table where an eyball like white substance/object is in a casing on the table.+halbtotale - then moves over to his experimentation table where an eyeball-like white substance/object is in a casing on the table.
-====Szene B36.6====+====B36.6====
nahe/closeup - He puts his pen over it and pushes the button on the end with his thumb. nahe/closeup - He puts his pen over it and pushes the button on the end with his thumb.
-====Szene B36.7====+====B36.7====
-the pen empties - Instantly the same kind of iris lookalike structure that we have just seen under the microscope is forming on the eyeball. It starts glowing, closing and opening like a aperture of a photocamera, rotating and then desintegrating somehow eating into the eyball which turns black and starts smoking. +The pen empties - Instantly the same kind of iris-lookalike structure that we have just seen under the microscope is forming on the eyeball. It starts glowing; closing and opening like the aperture of a camera, rotating and then disintegrating, somehow eating into the eyball which turns black and starts smoking.
-====Szene B36.8====+====B36.8====
Face of Big Fish -> frowning He looks worried. Face of Big Fish -> frowning He looks worried.
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===Ping's point of view=== ===Ping's point of view===
====P1.7==== ====P1.7====
-Ping grabs her [[spray paint belt]] that lies next to her and gets up. +Ping grabs her [[spray paint belt]] that lies next to her, and gets up.
====P1.8==== ====P1.8====
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====P2.10==== ====P2.10====
-and another street where at one point we see AZ in the background training. +and then another street, where at one point, we see AZ in the background training.
====P2.11==== ====P2.11====
-A little further down she briefly talks to [[someone]] on the way.+A little further along she briefly talks to [[someone]] on the way.
====P2.12==== ====P2.12====
-Further down she spots an old [[MoPic Shoe Poster]] (from a earlier version of Azraels Shoes that shows some functionality of Azraels Shoes) and +Yet further along, she spots an old [[MoPic Shoe Poster]] (from a earlier version of Azraels Shoes, that shows some functionality of Azraels Shoes) and
====P2.13==== ====P2.13====
-she prise off the chip that sits inside the old poster - making it defunct. (closeup hand putting her knife onto the spot cutting a square hole and prising it open and plopping out the chip.+prises off the chip that sits inside the old poster - making it defunct. (closeup of her hand, putting her knife onto the spot, cutting a square hole, prising it open and plopping out the chip.
====P2.14==== ====P2.14====
-Then she pulls out a [[chip]] of her belt and +She pulls out a [[chip]]from her belt and
====P2.15==== ====P2.15====
-puts it into the poster in place of the older chip. (closeup again)+puts it into the poster, in place of the other one. (closeup again)
====P2.16==== ====P2.16====
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====P3.19==== ====P3.19====
-She wipes off dust and dirt with her hand. +She wipes off dust and dirt with her hand,
====P3.20==== ====P3.20====
-Then she pulls out a a roll and a spray can. +then pulls out a roll and spray can.
====P3.21==== ====P3.21====
-She puts the roll on the ground and it unfolds itself into a flowery [[ornamental mask]].+Putting the roll on the ground,it unfolds itself into a flowery [[ornamental mask]].
====P3.22==== ====P3.22====
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====P3.29&P30==== ====P3.29&P30====
-She would need to wait shortly for the paint to dry. A good time to pre-roll a cigarette. (closeup rolling the cigarette)+She would need to wait for a short while for the paint to dry. A good time to roll a cigarette. (closeup rolling the cigarette)
====P3.31==== ====P3.31====
-Once her mural dried she pulls out a [[chip]] from her belt +Once her mural has dried, she pulls out a [[chip]] from her belt
====P3.32==== ====P3.32====
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====P3.33&34==== ====P3.33&34====
-then places it into the round whole of the mask shape on the wall. (one closeup popping the chip in place)+places it into the round hole of the mask shape on the wall. (One closeup popping the chip in place)
====P3.35==== ====P3.35====
-Slowly a picture is (half naturally half electronically looking) assembling, showing Pings signature. Then her whole clip that we have seen in the intro sequence is shown on the spray painted motion picture canvas. Just when we are entering the part that shows the anarchic site blinking the signal drops and some strange binary numbers flash onto the screen ('LIFE' in binary code). +Slowly a picture is assembling,(half natural, half electronic looking) showing Pings signature. Then the whole clip we have seen in the intro sequence, is shown on the spray painted motion picture canvas. Just when we enter the part showing the anarchic site blinking, the signal drops and some strange binary numbers flash onto the screen ('LIFE' in binary code).
====P3.36==== ====P3.36====
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====P3.38==== ====P3.38====
-"rewinds" the installation with her thumbs. Looking at it again there seems nothing wrong with it. She scratches her head shortly+"rewinds" the installation with her thumbs. Looking at it again there seems nothing wrong with it. She scratches her head shortly.
====P3.39==== ====P3.39====
-Happy that she has done her job so well and being in peace with her artistic self she leaves the scene+Happy that she has done her job well, and being at peace with her creativity, she leaves the scene
====P4.40==== ====P4.40====
-she stumbles back through the city which gets into sunset mood. +and stumbles back through the city, which is getting into sunset mood.
====P5.41==== ====P5.41====
-somewhere she enters an abondened looking building (opening door and getting in).+She enters an abondened looking building, (opening door and getting in).
====P6.42&43&44==== ====P6.42&43&44====
-and climbs up the stairs +and climbs the stairs
====P7.45==== ====P7.45====
-to the roof (opens door to the roof and steps out).+to the roof,(opens door to the roof and steps out).
====P7.46==== ====P7.46====
-up there she sits down+There she sits down,
====P7.47==== ====P7.47====
-smokes the prerolled cigarette+smokes the pre-rolled cigarette
====P7.48==== ====P7.48====
-and chills with a nice view over the city.+and chills with, a nice view over the city.
===Az's point of view=== ===Az's point of view===
====A2.5==== ====A2.5====
-We see AZ jogging down a street. we see Ping in the Background (P2.10).+We see AZ jogging down a street, and see Ping in the Background. (P2.10).
====A28.6==== ====A28.6====
We see AZ jogging down another street. We see AZ jogging down another street.
-====A29.7====+====A28.7====
-He then arrives at the parkour start point where the other three parkour runners are already stand on the registration point talking to the [[registration man]]. Azrael goes to them and +He arrives at the parkour start point, where the other three parkour runners are already standing on the registration point, talking to the [[registration man]]. Azrael goes to them and
====A29.8==== ====A29.8====
-tells the registrar who he is. +tells the registrar who he is.
 + 
 + 
 +===== Dialog:=====
 +fRED:Warum gehts nich los? - las mal gucken Old R.
 + 
 +fRED: Hmmm. Fehlt nur Azrael - den kennt eh keiner. Las uns losmachen!?
 + 
 +
 +Old R.: komm warte kurz. Wir gehen gleich rüber
 + 
 +Old R.: ah da kommt er ja
 + 
 +fRED: wegen einem - komm - is doch nanoscheisse.
 + 
 +Old R.: Hi
 + 
 +Az: Hi
 + 
 +Az: Azrael ist mein Name.
 + 
 +Old R.: Bist Du registriert? Wie war Dein Name?
 + 
 +Az.: Ich denke schon. Azreal.... sagte ich bereits.
 + 
 +Old R.: Ja Du stehst drauf. Komm wir gehen rüber die anderen warten schon ewig.
 + 
 +Az.: Kannst Du meine Tasche nehmen?
 + 
 +Old R.: Oh Mann ja komm gib her.
 + 
 +Old R.: Wir gehen gleich rüber.
 + 
 +Old R. lauter: Ok Leute lasst uns zum Start gehen und endlich anfangen.
====A28.9==== ====A28.9====
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====A28.11==== ====A28.11====
-The registrar is then calling the bunch of runners to attention and +The registrar is then calling the group of runners to attention, and
====A28.12==== ====A28.12====
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====A28.13G==== ====A28.13G====
-A list of rules rolls through the screen (no physical harm to the other runners, points for best route, best jumps and first to get to the goal). +A list of rules rolls through the screen (no physical harm to the other runners; points for best route; best jumps, and first to get to the finish).
====A28.14==== ====A28.14====
-A group of people cheers from the sidewalk. +A group of people cheer from the sidewalk.
====A28.15==== ====A28.15====
-The laser line in front of the runners starts flashing faster and faster until it goes out. The race starts and the runners run off down the street.+The laser line in front of the runners starts flashing faster and faster until it goes out. The race starts, and the runners run down the street.
====A28.16&17&18&19==== ====A28.16&17&18&19====
-They hop over obstacles (benches, trashcans whatever there is) and push and shove each other, two (not AZ) even have a little fight where one falls down. ( it is supposed to be a rough race) +They hop over obstacles (benches, trashcans whatever there is) and push and shove each other. Two (not AZ) even have a scrap, one falling down. ( it is supposed to be a rough race)
====A28.20==== ====A28.20====
-In the distance they start running down different alleyways and streets and split up going into different entrances.+In the distance they are running down different alleys and streets, splitting up and going in different entrances.
===Big Fish's point of view=== ===Big Fish's point of view===
-====Szene B36.9====+====B36.9====
-The put down man who just had a failed experiment is rolling to his communication desk+The put down man who just had a failed experiment, is rolling to his communication desk
-====Szene B37.10====+====B37.10====
-closeup hand auf tisch - where he makes some handmovement on the table interface that closely resembles the interface Ping has on her arm.+closeup hand auf tisch - where he makes some movement on the table interface, that closely resembles the interface Ping has on her arm.
-====Szene B37.11====+====B37.11====
halbnahe silhouette wie am anfang- halbnahe silhouette wie am anfang-
-On one of his floating screens a list of "emails" or better "avatar mails" is showing up. +On one of his floating screens a list of 'emails' or better 'avatar mails' is showing up.
-====Szene B37.12====+====B37.12====
-closeup - With his thumb on the interface he scrolls through them +closeup - thumb on the interface, he scrolls through them
-====Szene B37.13====+====B37.13====
-halbnahe von B27.11 - and the topics are all a bunch of "help me! Need cure for my limb leg! my plants are loosing leaves" etc etc Some of the other screens show a "network error" and general flickering. +halbnahe von B27.11 - and the topics are all a bunch of 'Help me! Need cure for my limb/leg! My plants are loosing leaves!', etc. Some of the other screens show a "network error" and are flickering.
-====Szene B37.14====+====B37.14====
closeup finger again - his finger is scrolling down closeup finger again - his finger is scrolling down
-====Szene B37.15 & 16(G)====+====B37.15 & 16(G)====
halbnahe von B27.11 - halbnahe von B27.11 -
-through the list of avatarmails. One of the mail blinks selected but shortly later there is a error message that a connection attempt fails (connection attempt failed due to unknown network error) -+through the list of avatar-mails. One of the mail blinks 'selected', but shortly after there is an 'error message' showing a failed connection (due to unknown network error) -
-====Szene B37.17====+====B37.17====
-halbnahe/nahe - Big Fish shakes his head in disapointment.+halbnahe/nahe - Big Fish shakes his head in dissapointment.
==Act 3== ==Act 3==
===Ping's point of view=== ===Ping's point of view===
====P7.49==== ====P7.49====
-Dreamy looking around she also looks down from the roof. +Dreamily looking around, she also looks down from the roof.
====P7.50==== ====P7.50====
-she sees AZ running by on on edge.+and sees AZ running by on on edge.
====P7.51==== ====P7.51====
-She follows him with her eyes (closeup on her turning her head) around the corner of the building she sits on and +She follows him with her eyes (closeup on her turning her head) around the corner of the building she on, and
====P7.52==== ====P7.52====
-sees him running towards an old slide open door. The door opens way before AZ reaches it but just when he actually arrives and wants to enter the building it slams close resulting in Azrael running into it. ''(camera perspective would ideally include pings shadowy figure in the forground and the sliding door with AZ down the street (maybe needs a ladder for camera position or such))''+watches him running towards an old sliding door. The door opens way before AZ reaches it but just when he actually arrives and wants to enter the building it slams close resulting in Azrael running into it. ''(camera perspective would ideally include pings shadowy figure in the forground and the sliding door with AZ down the street (maybe needs a ladder for camera position or such))''
====P7.53==== ====P7.53====
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====P7.54==== ====P7.54====
-Azrael moves back it reopens just to close again when Azrael is trying to run through it again. One two more tries +Azrael moves back. It re-opens, only to close again when Azrael tries to run through again. One two more tries
====P7.55==== ====P7.55====
-Ping who is laughing loud, +Ping is laughing loudly,
====P7.56==== ====P7.56====
-Az looks up at +Az looks up and
====P7.57==== ====P7.57====
-she instantly hides (falling rolling backward) on the roof so she can´t see her. Feeling caught redhanded - even though she is innocent of manipulating the door +she instantly hides (falling rolling backward) on the roof so he can´t see her, feeling as if caught red-handed - even though she is innocent of manipulating the door.
====P7.58==== ====P7.58====
-she grabs her stuff and runs off. +She grabs her stuff and runs off
====P7.59==== ====P7.59====
-through the door she came through+through the door she came through.
====P8.60==== ====P8.60====
-Still laughing she is running down the stairs and +Still laughing, she is running down the stairs and
====P9.61==== ====P9.61====
-enters the street checking over her shoulder that Azrael is not following her. +goes into the street checking behind her that Azrael is not following.
====P9.62==== ====P9.62====
-After running down the street and then feeling save from being followed +After running down the street and then feeling safe from pursuit,
====P10.63==== ====P10.63====
-she enters another old fucked up building. +she enters another old fucked-up building,
====P10.64==== ====P10.64====
-Going up some other stairs+and going up some other stairs
====P11.65==== ====P11.65====
-She opens a crack the door to Big Fishs laboratory to say "Hi" (waves hand childishly) to Big Fish who is still trying to figure out whats wrong with his communication devices and looking grumpy as he had a bad day and nothing works as expected. +opens a the door a crack to Big Fish's laboratory saying "Hi" (waving her hand childishly) to Big Fish who is still trying to figure out what's wrong with his communication devices, and looks grumpy, having had a bad day with nothing working as expected.
====P12.66==== ====P12.66====
-Then we see her entering an amazing bright room (door opens illuminous). +We see Ping entering an amazing bright room (door opens illuminous).
====P13.67==== ====P13.67====
-inside of a green house full of plants and flowers. +inside a green house full of plants and flowers.
====P13.68==== ====P13.68====
-Breaking off some old leaves an a plant,+She takes off some old leaves from a plant,
====P13.69==== ====P13.69====
-talking and stroking another flower that bears fruit and +talking and stroking a flower that bears fruit. She
====P13.70==== ====P13.70====
-picking a tomato +picks a tomato
====P13.71==== ====P13.71====
-that she eats instantly+eating it instantly.
====P13.72==== ====P13.72====
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====P13.75==== ====P13.75====
-She then presses another button (closeup her arm interface) and +She presses another button (closeup her arm interface) and
====P13.76==== ====P13.76====
-the loop of Azrael slamming into the door shows up (showing AZ only from Pings Point of View without ever showing his face). Both crack up laughing loud for a while. +the loop of Azrael slamming into the door shows up (showing AZ only from Pings Point of View without ever showing his face). Both crack-up with loud laughter for a while.
====P13.77==== ====P13.77====
She turns off her screen which swirls back into her arm and She turns off her screen which swirls back into her arm and
-Big Fish then gives her another hug with then leaving the green house.+Big Fish gives her another hug. They leave the green house.
====P13.78==== ====P13.78====
-Ping quite happy sits down on something in the greenhouse reactivates the screen.+Ping quite happy, sits down on something in the greenhouse and reactivates the screen.
====P13.79==== ====P13.79====
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====P13.80==== ====P13.80====
-that reads something like "Technology You Trust" she puts it over the loop and adds her signature to it smiles turns off screen then gets up and out of the greenhouse. (all fixed camera position)+that reads something like 'Technology You Trust', she puts it over the loop and adds her signature to it, then smiling, turns off the screen, gets up and leaves the greenhouse. (all fixed camera position)
====P14.81==== ====P14.81====
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====P15.82==== ====P15.82====
-On the streets again she reuses another old poster to plop in her new made loop of Azreal running into the door. (optional spraypainting another one depending on location that would subdivide that loop into three more!!!)+On the streets again, she re-uses another old poster to plop in her new made loop of Azreal running into the door. (optional spray painting another one, depending on a location that would subdivide that loop into three more!!!)
====P15.83==== ====P15.83====
-A last time she cracks up about it and moves on down the street, +Again she cracks up about it, and moves off down the street,
====P16.84==== ====P16.84====
-enters another old building +and entering another old building
====P17.85==== ====P17.85====
-goes up some stairs +goes up some stairs.
====P18.86==== ====P18.86====
-enters her apartment/bedroom.+She enters her apartment/bedroom.
====P18.87==== ====P18.87====
-There she turns on her walls by way of an old lightswitch which makes very white bright glowing light and+and turns on her walls by way of an old lightswitch which makes very white bright glowing light and
====P18.88==== ====P18.88====
-through her activated interface (by this time we don´t explain in detail how she turns it on anymore just hold up left arm in front of her) she chooses a calm nighly loop. We see her fall into bed and +through her activated interface (by this time we don´t explain in detail how she turns it on anymore just hold up left arm in front of her) she chooses a calm nightly loop. We see her fall into bed and
====P18.89==== ====P18.89====
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====A7.23==== ====A7.23====
-Then approaches the sliding door (below Ping P7.50).+Then approaching the sliding door, (below Ping P7.50).
====A7.24==== ====A7.24====
-Runs into the door a number of times. +runs into the door a number of times.
====A7.25&26&27==== ====A7.25&26&27====
-Hits and kicks the door - (hammers on it various closeups feet kicking the door hands hammering on it etc). +He hits and kicks the door - (hammers on it. Various closeups of his feet kicking the door hands hammering on it etc).
====A7.28==== ====A7.28====
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====A7.29==== ====A7.29====
-tiefe camera az im vordergrund ping auf dach - he pauses, giving her a furious look. then concentrated look onto his arm.+tiefe camera az im vordergrund ping auf dach - he pauses giving her a furious look, then concentrated look onto his arm.
====A7.30==== ====A7.30====
-halbnahe - Checks his tracker (him looking at his arm)+halbnahe - checks his tracker (him looking at his arm)
====A7.31==== ====A7.31====
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====A7.32==== ====A7.32====
-totale/halbtotale - runs off into the direction he come from+totale/halbtotale - and runs off into the direction he come from
====A29.33==== ====A29.33====
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====A29.35&36&37==== ====A29.35&36&37====
-Running feet, Wall, Jumping, +Running feet, wall, jumping,
====A29.38==== ====A29.38====
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====A30.40==== ====A30.40====
-when he reaches the finish line he just looses barely to the first runner coming in in front of him. +when he reaches the finish line he just looses to the first runner coming in in front of him.
====A30.41==== ====A30.41====
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====A30.43==== ====A30.43====
-Azrael just gets a certificate from the registrar who shakes his hand and gives him his bag+Azrael just gets a certificate from the registrar, who shakes his hand and gives him his bag.
====A30.44==== ====A30.44====
-with his head hanging down he slowly moves away from [[the after race celebration]]. +With head hanging, he slowly moves away from [[the after race celebration]].
====A31.45==== ====A31.45====
-We see him walking through a street he just through unhappily stumbling over an obstacle he was raving over through the race +unhappily walking through a street he had just run through, he stumbles over an obstacle he was raving over through the race.
====A31.46==== ====A31.46====
-arriving at a spot on the river - perhaps an old long abandoned port facility. +He arrives at a spot on the river - perhaps an old long-abandoned port facility.
 + 
 +In the background - is a torn up umbrella - Az reaches for his water bottle.
====A31.47==== ====A31.47====
-He then lights a fire in barrel or such with a [[futuristic looking lighter]] and +then lights a fire in barrel, or such like, with a [[futuristic looking lighter]] and
====A31.48==== ====A31.48====
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====A31.50==== ====A31.50====
-totale - which he holds over the fire+totale - and holds over the fire
====A31.51==== ====A31.51====
-gesicht im feuerschein nahe - Looking defeated, wistful and deflated. +gesicht im feuerschein nahe - Looking defeated, wistful and deflated,
====A31.52==== ====A31.52====
-nahe - eats some corn+nahe - he eats some corn, then
====A31.53==== ====A31.53====
-totale - gets up and leaves the area+totale - gets up and leaves.
====A32.54==== ====A32.54====
-Then he goes in the direction of home through a street, walking past the loop Ping made of him (P15.82) running into the door. +He heads off home through the streets, walking past the loop Ping made of him (P15.82) running into the door.
====A32.55==== ====A32.55====
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====A32.57&58==== ====A32.57&58====
-halbnahe und close he furiously rips chip off wall.+halbnahe und close he furiously rips chip off wall,
====A32.59==== ====A32.59====
-close face - He looks pissed off, and +close face - looking pissed-off, and
====A32.60==== ====A32.60====
-halbtotale - sets off at a run out of the street.+halbtotale - sets off at a run out down the street.
====A32.61(G)==== ====A32.61(G)====
-His tracker guiding him to her house.+His tracker guides him to her house.
====A33.62==== ====A33.62====
-He rips open door to house and enters+He pulls open door and enters
====A33.63==== ====A33.63====
-goes up the stairs and +runs up the stairs and
====A33.64==== ====A33.64====
-finally knocks on the her door.+bangs on her door.
===Big Fish's point of view=== ===Big Fish's point of view===
-He shuts off his screen and moves over to a different desk where he puts in seeds into some seed growing containers. He also looks at some just [[sprouted seeds]] and pours some drops of liquid over them (they would glitter in the artificial lights. +====B37.18====
 +He shuts off his screen with a hand movement on the table and
-Then Ping comes in, saying Hi, and closes the door again. Big Fish finishes to put some more drops of liquid on some more [[sprouted seeds]] and then goes out the door holding a baby plant in his hands. Entering the Green House he gives Ping the baby plant that he carried along - she smiles and puts into "her corner". Ping then shows Big fish the loop of Azrael running into the door. They laugh. He then says goodbye to Ping and goes back to his laboratory. Pleased of seeing Ping he goes Picks up a Bottle of Wine and places it on a table near a very comfortable chair. Then he goes over to a jar and puts his nanobot pen in it which fills up then he goes to the bookshelf and picks out a Book from Christopher G. Langton "Computation at the Edge of Chaos" sits down in the chair pours some wine into a glass then lets the nanobots into the wine takes a zip opens the book - we see his faces reading and then he closes his eyes falling asleep from the long night. +====B37.19====
 +Totale - getting up,
-He then has a lucid dream where the Game of Life appears and slowly morphs into a pixalated face. Cut black out.+====B37.20====
 +Totale andere Richtung - moves to a different desk,
 + 
 +====B38.21&22&23====
 +halbnahe Nahe Closeup - where he takes some earth from a bucket with a Spoon, and fills some small plant containers.
 + 
 +====B38.24&25&26====
 +halbnahe Nahe Closeup - He takes a sprouted seed and puts it into a container.
 + 
 +====B38.27 optional====
 +- then takes his pen, puts it in a liquid storage container that sits next to the plants and
 + 
 +====B38.28 optional====
 +closeup - puts a drop of nanostuff into a different container with earth in - and instantly a sprout grows.
 + 
 +====B38.29 ====
 +He puts the pen in a different container and
 + 
 +====B38.30====
 +putting a drop on some already [[sprouted seeds]] (they would glitter in the artificial lights and start growing a bit visually (optional definately).
 + 
 +====B11.31====
 +He turns around as he hears a knock on the door -
 + 
 +====B38.32====
 +Ping puts head round the door, saying 'Hi', closesing the door again.
 + 
 +====B38.33====
 +halb nah - Big Fish finishes putting more drops of liquid on more [[sprouted seeds]] and
 + 
 +====B38.34====
 +totaler then grabbing a baby plant, goes out the door.
 + 
 +====B13.35/72====
 +Entering the Green House
 + 
 +====B13.36/73====
 +he gives Ping the baby plant that he took. -
 + 
 +====B13.74-77====
 +She smiles and puts it into 'her corner'. Ping then shows Big fish the loop of Azrael running into the door again. They laugh. He says goodbye to Ping and
 + 
 +====B13.35====
 +leaving the greenhouse (opening door and stepping out
 + 
 +====B39.36====
 +tür halbnah - enters his laboratory.
 + 
 +====B39.37====
 +nah - Pleased at seeing Ping, he takes a Bottle of Wine from a shelf from between his laboratory equipment
 + 
 +====B39.38====
 +totale - and places it on a small table near a comfortable chair.
 + 
 +====B39.39====
 +halb nahe - He goes over to a jar and
 + 
 +====B39.40====
 +nah - puts his nanobot pen in which fills up, then
 + 
 +====B39.40.b====
 +halbnah - puts the pen into its holding place.
 + 
 +====B39.41====
 +total - He goes to the small bookshelf and
 + 
 +====B39.42====
 +nah picks out a book from Christopher G. Langton "Computation at the Edge of Chaos"
 + 
 +====B39.42====
 +nah über schulter (buch cover von oben - (which he quickly turns in his hand (as if to glance over it briefly)
 + 
 +====B39.43====
 +totale - He sits down in the chair,
 + 
 +====B39.44====
 +nahe/halbnahe pours some wine into a glass, then
 + 
 +====B39.45====
 +halb nahe takes the pen out of its holding place
 + 
 +====B39.46====
 +nahe letting the nanobots into the wine.
 + 
 +====B39.47====
 +Taking a sip, he opens the book -
 + 
 +====B39.48====
 +We see his face reading, and then he closes his eyes and falls asleep, tired from his long night.
 + 
 +====B39.49====
 +He enters a lucid dream where
 + 
 +====B39.50(G)====
 +the Game of Life appears, and slowly morphs into a pixalated face. Cut black out.
==Act 4== ==Act 4==
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====PA18.95==== ====PA18.95====
-closeuop - pulls out a small [[spraycan with sleeping potion]] from her pocket and +closeuop - pulls out a small [[spraycan of sleeping potion]] from her pocket and
====PA18.96==== ====PA18.96====
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====PA18.99==== ====PA18.99====
-halbnahe - puts some liquid on his mouth that comes out of the same bottle that she is still holding in her hand (other end perhaps). +halbnahe - puts some liquid on his mouth that comes from the same bottle that she still has in her hand (other end perhaps).
====PA18.100==== ====PA18.100====
-closeup - Shortly later he wakes up (open eyes) and she is looking at him.+closeup - A little while later he wakes up (open eyes) and she is looking at him.
-He opens his eyes blinking and with a knocked out feeling. They both sit there and look at each other for a brief moment. +He opens his eyes blinking, with a knocked out feeling. They both sit there and look at each other for a brief moment.
====PA18.101==== ====PA18.101====
-totale - then he gets up and she invited him with a gesture over to a table thats in front of a wall. +totale - He stands up and she invites him with a gesture, to a table that's in front of a wall.
====PA19.102==== ====PA19.102====
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* Az: "You were fucking around with those doors!" * Az: "You were fucking around with those doors!"
-Az pulls out of his pants pocket the chip he grabbed from her installation and gives it to Ping. She plugs it into a prepared spot on her wall in the middle of the table and it shows Az running into the door.+Az pulls out of his pant's pocket the chip he grabbed from her installation and gives it to Ping. She plugs it into a prepared spot on her wall in the middle of the table and it shows Az running into the door.
* Az: "Who if not you?" * Az: "Who if not you?"
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====PA19.105==== ====PA19.105====
-Camera über schulter von Ping - Ping turns on her floating nano-screen. She puts in the binary code over her arm interface (that just morphed) pushes enter and that is then translated into ASCII characters that spell out "LIFE" and "IT WAS ME!!!!". We see Az look puzzled behind the screen. +Camera über schulter von Ping - Ping turns on her floating nano-screen. She puts in the binary code over her arm interface (that just morphed) pushed 'enter', and it translated into ASCII characters that spell out "LIFE" and "IT WAS ME!!!!". We see Az look puzzled behind the screen.
====PA19.106==== ====PA19.106====
Wieder Totale mit Tisch und Wand - Wieder Totale mit Tisch und Wand -
-*Azrael: "Lets Go see Professor Big Fish and ask him whats going on!"+*Azrael: "Lets Go see Professor Big Fish and ask whats going on!"
* Ping: "Big Fish? You know him?" * Ping: "Big Fish? You know him?"
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===Big Fish's point of view=== ===Big Fish's point of view===
-Sweaty and tired Big Fish wakes up from his lucid dream. Dazed he walkes to a water boiling machine that probably has been boiling water for him the last 40 years. He turns it on (steam blubber steam) he takes a cup that he is using every day without washing up and put some loose tea in a tea egg. He then pours the water over the tea. He dazes around while the tea is brewing. Morning sunlight shining through some slits in the otherwise darkened lab. After while he has a couple of zips.+====B40.51====
 +closup face - Sweaty and tired Big Fish wakes up from his lucid dream.
 + 
 +====B40.52====
 +totale/halbtotale - Dazed he walkes to a water boiling machine that probably has been
 + 
 +====B40.53====
 +closeup boiling water for him the last 40 years. He turns it on (steam blubber steam)
 + 
 +====B40.54====
 +halbnahe - he takes a cup that he uses every day without washing it up, and put some loose tea in a tea egg, pouring water over the tea.
 + 
 +====B40.54====
 +fullbody - He dazes around, while the tea brews. Morning sunlight shines through some slits in the otherwise darkened lab.
 + 
 +====B40.55====
 +halbnahe After a while he has a couple of sips. (Steam coming from cup with sunlight behind)
==Act 5== ==Act 5==
===Ping, Azrael and Big Fish=== ===Ping, Azrael and Big Fish===
-====PAB20.107====+====PA20.107====
-Ping and Azrael get out of Pings Appartmenthouse and +Ping and Azrael get out of Pings Appartment and
-====PAB20.108====+====PA20.108====
-walk along a street then+walk along a street, then
-====PAB21.109====+====PA21.109====
-enter the house of Big Fish Laboratory +enter the house of Big Fish Laboratory, going
-====PAB21.110====+====PA21.110====
-inside up the stairs and +up the stairs and
-====PAB21.111====+====PA21.111====
knock on the door. knock on the door.
====PAB21.112==== ====PAB21.112====
-He open the door from inside and looks shocked and surprised - then even happy to see them together visiting him. Ping just waves her hand as to say "its a long story don´t even ask". Then Big Fish asks them in. +Big Fish opens the door from inside and looks shocked, surprised, then happy to see them together visiting him. Ping just waves her hand as to say "its a long story so don´t even ask". Then Big Fish invites them in.
====PAB21.113==== ====PAB21.113====
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====PAB21.114==== ====PAB21.114====
-closeup,Ping turns on her interfaces+closeup,Ping turns on her interfaces.
====PAB21.115==== ====PAB21.115====
-halbtotale tisch - she shows Big Fish the loops she recorded with the binary code in them. +halbtotale tisch - She shows Big Fish the loops she recorded with the binary code in them.
====PAB21.116==== ====PAB21.116====
halbnahe tisch Ping und Big Fish - She gives him the chips. halbnahe tisch Ping und Big Fish - She gives him the chips.
-Big Fish takes chips swivels around his old creaky office chair that has seen better times and rolls over to his workbench. +Big Fish takes the chips, swivels around his creaky old office chair that's seen better days and rolls over to his workbench.
====PAB21.117==== ====PAB21.117====
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====PAB21.118==== ====PAB21.118====
- Some circuitry visuals etc cutting in. +Some circuitry visuals etc cutting in.
====PAB21.119==== ====PAB21.119====
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====PAB21.119==== ====PAB21.119====
-Then all of the sudden the power cuts out. Picture black for some time then we see some strange-looking [[floating nano-lights]] brightning up the room a tid and floating off Big Fishs hands. (He pulled them out his pant pocket in the darkness and activated them). +Suddenly the power cuts out. Picture black for some time, then we see some strange-looking [[floating nano-lights]] brightning up the room, floating off Big Fishs hands. (He pulled them out his pant pocket in the darkness and activated them).
====PAB21.120&121&122==== ====PAB21.120&121&122====
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====PAB21.123==== ====PAB21.123====
-Big Fish crouches under a table and fiddles with something looking like an old school generator or such. The power comes back on visible by the screens all in reset mode and the light flickering on.+Big Fish crouches under a table and fiddles with something looking like an old school generator or such. The power comes back on, visible by the screens all in 're-set' mode and the lights flickering back on.
====PAB21.124==== ====PAB21.124====
-Big Fish looks terrrorized at the plate where +Big Fish looks terrified at the plate where
====PAB21.125==== ====PAB21.125====
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All three look disappointed. All three look disappointed.
-====PAB21.119====+====PAB21.127====
closeup Pings face - Ping has another Brainwave blink blink closeup Pings face - Ping has another Brainwave blink blink
-====PAB21.120====+====PAB21.128====
-halbtotale - she shows with her hands sliding doors movement (in the background we see the Azrael runs into door clip as a second layer overlay).+halbtotale - she shows with her hands, the sliding doors movement (in the background we see the Azrael runs into door clip as a second layer overlay).
The other two nod. The other two nod.
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They all leave the room. They all leave the room.
-====PAB22.121====+====PAB22.129====
Go out of the building Go out of the building
-====PAB23.122====+====PAB23.130====
-along a street where there is the butterfly installation of ping (the very first one) when they walk by it it changes shortly (what and how to be figured out in postproduction) showing Kalkins presence. +along a street where there is the butterfly installation of ping (the very first one). When they walk by it, it changes quickly(what and how to be figured out in postproduction) showing Kalkins presence.
-====PAB24.123====+====PAB24.131====
The turn into the familiar alleyway and come to the [[sliding door]]. The turn into the familiar alleyway and come to the [[sliding door]].
-====PAB24.124====+====PAB24.132====
They get closer to the door and They get closer to the door and
-====PAB24.125====+====PAB24.133====
halbnahe - Big Fish places a sensor by it. halbnahe - Big Fish places a sensor by it.
-====PAB24.126====+====PAB24.134====
-When they move away from the door it strangely opens and closes on its own. +When they move away from the door it strangely opens and closes on its own.
-====PAB24.127====+====PAB24.135====
-They all look amazed and puzzled. Big Fish goes and picks up the sensor. They all leave the scene with the door together.+They all look amazed and puzzled. Big Fish goes and picks up the sensor. They all leave the scene with the door closed.
==Ending== ==Ending==
-====PAB25.123====+====PAB25.136====
-They all enter a commons room (bar, meeting place or such maybe open air) and go over to a big bowl of self made cider +They enter a Commons Room (bar, meeting place or such maybe open air) and go over to a big bowl of home-made cider
-====PAB25.124====+====PAB25.137====
-closeup of one of them pouring the liquid into a glass out of the big barrel that in the middle of the place+closeup of one of them pouring the liquid into a glass from the big barrel in the middle of the place
-====PAB25.125&126&127&128====+====PAB25.138&139&140&141====
-observation am tisch aus verschiedenen perspektiven - and have some laugh and talk and play stupid little table games until the sun sets.+observation am tisch aus verschiedenen perspektiven - and laugh, talk and play stupid little table games until the sun sets.
-====PAB25.129====+====PAB25.142====
-They then get up and say farewell to each other and leave the place in different directions. +They then get up and say farewell to each other and leave the place going in different directions.
===Ping's point of view=== ===Ping's point of view===
-====P26.130====+====P26.143====
Ping goes through two familiar streets Ping goes through two familiar streets
-====P26.131====+====P26.144====
-back to the park from the beginning which shimmers in the moonshine. +back to the park from the beginning, which shimmers in the moonlight.
-====P26.132====+====P26.145====
-halbnahe ping sitzens - She sits down and looks at the stars. (Maybe she smokes again). We see her sitting there in amazement looking at the star (open mouth really amazed and happy). After a while she scratches her head. +halbnahe ping sitzens - Ping sits down and looks at the stars. (Maybe she smokes again). We see her sitting there in amazement looking at a star (open mouthed, really amazed and happy). After a while she scratches her head.
-====P26.133====+====P26.146====
closeup - She turns on her interface and closeup - She turns on her interface and
-====P26.132====+====P26.147====
halbnahe - floating screen for a last time rewinds what she has just seen and there the stars are forming into a butterfly which flies off into the black universe. Her eyes widen.................... halbnahe - floating screen for a last time rewinds what she has just seen and there the stars are forming into a butterfly which flies off into the black universe. Her eyes widen....................
===Az's point of view=== ===Az's point of view===
====A34.65==== ====A34.65====
-On his way home (walks along one two streets that are familar)+On his way home (walking along one two streets that are familar)
====A34.66==== ====A34.66====
-closeup Arm - Azrael checks his tracker to see the way home (he is still not accustomed to his surrounding)+closeup Arm - Azrael checks his tracker to see the way home (he is still not familiar with his surroundings)
====A35.67==== ====A35.67====
-when he looks he sees a different part where the park is located strangely glowing then the map picture disintegrated and there is just a message on his screen that says "Network Busy"..........................+when he looks, he notices a different part where the park is located, glowing strangely, then the map picture disintegrates leaving just a message on his screen saying "Network Busy"..........................
===Big Fish's point of view=== ===Big Fish's point of view===
-Big Fish back in his laboratory puts the analysing sensor from the door on the chip analysing plate. One of his floating screens shows a vast network of connections pulsating rythmicly and organic like a brainscan. He then turns to his other floating screen and calls a hacker guy [[tim]] on the webcam. He sends him the data. Tim looks at it, shrugs, shakes his head and sends him two other files. Firstly a connection from one computer to the door - when a normal person would remotely control that door(typo overlay: normal remote control connection), then secondly a disguised connection (typo: disguised connection) showing multiple connections ending at the doorpoint but still just a fraction of what has been going on. Then Big Fishs nods shaken and in thoughts and raises hands to say thanks, switches off connection to hacker and switches back to the screen with the connection analyses. Cut back to Big Fish Face close up frowning and thinking - Big Fishs End.+====B41.56====
 +Big Fish back enters his laboratory
 +
 +====B41.57====
 +and puts the analysing sensor from the door on the chip analysing plate.
 + 
 +====B41.58====
 +One of his floating screens shows a vast network of connections pulsating rythymicly and organicly like a brainscan. He turns to the other floating screen, and calls a hacker guy [[tim]] on the webcam.
 + 
 +====B41.59====
 +Saying 'hi' and visually asking him a question, he sends the data (a 'sending' message is on top of the pulsating picture).
 + 
 +====B41.60====
 +Tim looks at it, shrugs, shakes his head and sends him two other files (indicated by a "file sending 1/2 2/2 flashing on the screen within moments).
 + 
 +====B41.61====
 +The picture fades-in, firstly showing a connection from one computer to the door - when normally a person would remotely control the door (typo overlay: normal remote control connection),
 + 
 +====B41.62====
 +then secondly a disguised connection (typo: disguised connection) showing multiple connections ending at the doorpoint but still a mere fraction of what has been going on on Big Fish's picture.
 + 
 +====B41.63====
 +Big Fish nods, shaken and deep in thought. He raises hands to say thanks, switches off connection to hacker and looks to the screen with the connection analysis.
 + 
 +====B41.64====
 +Cut back to Big Fish Face close up frowning and thinking - Big Fishs End.

Current revision

Codenummer: PointOfView.PictureNumber.Actionplate.SubActionPlate(G=PureGrafik, LA=LiveAction) Example:

  1. P13.25.b (LA) = Pings Point of View, Picture 13, Action 25b (probably some subclip to explain something in more detail), Life Action
  2. AB25.105 = Azreal and Big Fishs Point of View, Picture 25, Action 105
  3. B30.39(G) = Big Fishs Point of View, Picture 30, Action 39, Purely Graphic


Contents

Act 0 - Title and Establishing Scene

O0.1

The movie opens with a flight from high above, into the divided city of Berlin(in a map/3D style) The year is 2028. One half is very green and the other white with sparse spots of greenery here and there. The surrounding land is absolutely green with white spots dotted about, resembling huge corporate greenhouses.

O0.2

The next shot shows the 'white' side, its huge clean structures blink up, and the text 'Bayeonia' comes into view.

O0.3

Scenes of futuristic surveillence cameras/robots,

O0.4

Clean white glassy architecture and

O0.5

people in corporate clothing, working like robots are seen(maybe intercut with robots).

O0.6

We cut back to the top view of the city, this time 'Berlin' (so the anarchic side blinks).

O0.7

The picture freeze frames, getting noisier, and zooms out to reveal it is a video showing on a floating screen.

Act 1 - Protagonist Introduction

Ping's point of view

P1.1

Retreatin further, the camera shot moving away from the beginning 'poster performance', we see Ping's arm which has an interface to control the floating screen. The camera moves further back and slightly sidewards, to show Ping seated on the grass, looking away from the screen to her right, distracted by a beautiful butterfly on a flower in front of her for some moments before it flies upwards. She watches it till it dissapears from sight.

P1.2

She is fiddling with the tattooed interface on her arm (stroking it upward downward). We see the butterfly and the flower as it would be seen from Ping's point of view, on the floating screen. Then she rubs her finger to the left over her arm, and we see the last bit of the poster sequence from the beginning.

P1.3

At the end of that "loop" she pushed her thumb down (closeup on the interface with her fingers moving over it)

P1.4

and the butterfly appears.

P1.5

Closeup her face: She smiles satisfied,

P1.6

pushes again on a different part of her arm, where her signature appears on the floating screen 'PING propaganda for a better world' (or some such. I have to find a better slogan or a good logo Banksy comes to mind!!!). She again rubs her thumb (closeup), and the whole sequence plays from where the anarchic side blinks, to the butterfly, and then her signature. Happy with her work, she turns off the screen which swirls into a black tiny thing implanted on her arm. She again touches her tattooed interface, takes the chip that is magnetically attached to a different part on her arm, and gets up.

Az's point of view

A27.1

Closeup on Azraels Feet with Azraels Shoes which are on some kind of elevation (concrete block or railing, or such) with a blurry street in the background. His Hand comes into view, and he slides his finger over the sides of the shoes. When he rubs his finger in one direction, the shoe 'laces' are tying closer, making the shoes fit better.

A27.2

Then he stretches (left right loop) and

A27.3

does other warm ups (decided when on location, like jumping up and down a little, etc).

A27.4

He practices a jump over a railing or other obstacle a couple of times, then jogs off into an alleyway.

Big Fish's point of view

B36.1(G&LA)

We see a swarm of nanobots assembling themself into some kind of iris-lookalike structure. The structure slowly zooms out until we see that the nanobots where visible on a floating screen and the screen is attached to some strange structure that resembles a electron microscope. The outline of Big Fish backlit by the screen comes into view.

B36.2

His hands fiddle with his nanobot collecting pen which he places on the glowing bit (which has a premade hole) of the tunnel microscope (lower part).

B36.3

closeup The pen fills up (visible by a transparent part of the pen that starts glowing more and more).

B36.4

close/halbnahe -> He grabs the pen

B36.5

halbtotale - then moves over to his experimentation table where an eyeball-like white substance/object is in a casing on the table.

B36.6

nahe/closeup - He puts his pen over it and pushes the button on the end with his thumb.

B36.7

The pen empties - Instantly the same kind of iris-lookalike structure that we have just seen under the microscope is forming on the eyeball. It starts glowing; closing and opening like the aperture of a camera, rotating and then disintegrating, somehow eating into the eyball which turns black and starts smoking.

B36.8

Face of Big Fish -> frowning He looks worried.

Act 2

Ping's point of view

P1.7

Ping grabs her spray paint belt that lies next to her, and gets up.

P1.8

She walks out of the park into the city.

P2.9

Along a street

P2.10

and then another street, where at one point, we see AZ in the background training.

P2.11

A little further along she briefly talks to someone on the way.

P2.12

Yet further along, she spots an old MoPic Shoe Poster (from a earlier version of Azraels Shoes, that shows some functionality of Azraels Shoes) and

P2.13

prises off the chip that sits inside the old poster - making it defunct. (closeup of her hand, putting her knife onto the spot, cutting a square hole, prising it open and plopping out the chip.

P2.14

She pulls out a chipfrom her belt and

P2.15

puts it into the poster, in place of the other one. (closeup again)

P2.16

Instantly her butterfly sighting appears on the posterscreen.

P2.17

Continuing walking down the street and around the corner

P3.18

she finally arrives at a spot where she decides it would be a good place to put up the full installation.

P3.19

She wipes off dust and dirt with her hand,

P3.20

then pulls out a roll and spray can.

P3.21

Putting the roll on the ground,it unfolds itself into a flowery ornamental mask.

P3.22

She shakes the spray can and

P3.23&24&25

starts painting the wall with some white/blueish glittery stuff in a horizontal rectangular longish shape.(couple of closeup and other camera POVs showing her painting the wall)

P3.26

When the nearly perfect rectangle is done she picks up the mask and

P3.27&28

spray-paints the right edge with the mask.

P3.29&P30

She would need to wait for a short while for the paint to dry. A good time to roll a cigarette. (closeup rolling the cigarette)

P3.31

Once her mural has dried, she pulls out a chip from her belt

P3.32

pulls off the protection paper and

P3.33&34

places it into the round hole of the mask shape on the wall. (One closeup popping the chip in place)

P3.35

Slowly a picture is assembling,(half natural, half electronic looking) showing Pings signature. Then the whole clip we have seen in the intro sequence, is shown on the spray painted motion picture canvas. Just when we enter the part showing the anarchic site blinking, the signal drops and some strange binary numbers flash onto the screen ('LIFE' in binary code).

P3.36

Looking puzzled

P3.37

she turns on the interface on her arm (CloseUp)

P3.38

"rewinds" the installation with her thumbs. Looking at it again there seems nothing wrong with it. She scratches her head shortly.

P3.39

Happy that she has done her job well, and being at peace with her creativity, she leaves the scene

P4.40

and stumbles back through the city, which is getting into sunset mood.

P5.41

She enters an abondened looking building, (opening door and getting in).

P6.42&43&44

and climbs the stairs

P7.45

to the roof,(opens door to the roof and steps out).

P7.46

There she sits down,

P7.47

smokes the pre-rolled cigarette

P7.48

and chills with, a nice view over the city.

Az's point of view

A2.5

We see AZ jogging down a street, and see Ping in the Background. (P2.10).

A28.6

We see AZ jogging down another street.

A28.7

He arrives at the parkour start point, where the other three parkour runners are already standing on the registration point, talking to the registration man. Azrael goes to them and

A29.8

tells the registrar who he is.


Dialog:

fRED:Warum gehts nich los? - las mal gucken Old R.

fRED: Hmmm. Fehlt nur Azrael - den kennt eh keiner. Las uns losmachen!?


Old R.: komm warte kurz. Wir gehen gleich rüber

Old R.: ah da kommt er ja

fRED: wegen einem - komm - is doch nanoscheisse.

Old R.: Hi

Az: Hi

Az: Azrael ist mein Name.

Old R.: Bist Du registriert? Wie war Dein Name?

Az.: Ich denke schon. Azreal.... sagte ich bereits.

Old R.: Ja Du stehst drauf. Komm wir gehen rüber die anderen warten schon ewig.

Az.: Kannst Du meine Tasche nehmen?

Old R.: Oh Mann ja komm gib her.

Old R.: Wir gehen gleich rüber.

Old R. lauter: Ok Leute lasst uns zum Start gehen und endlich anfangen.

A28.9

The man puts down a checkmark next to his name on the electronic paper he is holding. (closeup)

A28.10

Azrael gives the registrar his small rucksack.

A28.11

The registrar is then calling the group of runners to attention, and

A28.12

they get ready on their position marks on the street.

A28.13G

A list of rules rolls through the screen (no physical harm to the other runners; points for best route; best jumps, and first to get to the finish).

A28.14

A group of people cheer from the sidewalk.

A28.15

The laser line in front of the runners starts flashing faster and faster until it goes out. The race starts, and the runners run down the street.

A28.16&17&18&19

They hop over obstacles (benches, trashcans whatever there is) and push and shove each other. Two (not AZ) even have a scrap, one falling down. ( it is supposed to be a rough race)

A28.20

In the distance they are running down different alleys and streets, splitting up and going in different entrances.

Big Fish's point of view

B36.9

The put down man who just had a failed experiment, is rolling to his communication desk

B37.10

closeup hand auf tisch - where he makes some movement on the table interface, that closely resembles the interface Ping has on her arm.

B37.11

halbnahe silhouette wie am anfang- On one of his floating screens a list of 'emails' or better 'avatar mails' is showing up.

B37.12

closeup - thumb on the interface, he scrolls through them

B37.13

halbnahe von B27.11 - and the topics are all a bunch of 'Help me! Need cure for my limb/leg! My plants are loosing leaves!', etc. Some of the other screens show a "network error" and are flickering.

B37.14

closeup finger again - his finger is scrolling down

B37.15 & 16(G)

halbnahe von B27.11 - through the list of avatar-mails. One of the mail blinks 'selected', but shortly after there is an 'error message' showing a failed connection (due to unknown network error) -

B37.17

halbnahe/nahe - Big Fish shakes his head in dissapointment.

Act 3

Ping's point of view

P7.49

Dreamily looking around, she also looks down from the roof.

P7.50

and sees AZ running by on on edge.

P7.51

She follows him with her eyes (closeup on her turning her head) around the corner of the building she on, and

P7.52

watches him running towards an old sliding door. The door opens way before AZ reaches it but just when he actually arrives and wants to enter the building it slams close resulting in Azrael running into it. (camera perspective would ideally include pings shadowy figure in the forground and the sliding door with AZ down the street (maybe needs a ladder for camera position or such))

P7.53

Ping laughs a bit, (closeup face)

P7.54

Azrael moves back. It re-opens, only to close again when Azrael tries to run through again. One two more tries

P7.55

Ping is laughing loudly,

P7.56

Az looks up and

P7.57

she instantly hides (falling rolling backward) on the roof so he can´t see her, feeling as if caught red-handed - even though she is innocent of manipulating the door.

P7.58

She grabs her stuff and runs off

P7.59

through the door she came through.

P8.60

Still laughing, she is running down the stairs and

P9.61

goes into the street checking behind her that Azrael is not following.

P9.62

After running down the street and then feeling safe from pursuit,

P10.63

she enters another old fucked-up building,

P10.64

and going up some other stairs

P11.65

opens a the door a crack to Big Fish's laboratory saying "Hi" (waving her hand childishly) to Big Fish who is still trying to figure out what's wrong with his communication devices, and looks grumpy, having had a bad day with nothing working as expected.

P12.66

We see Ping entering an amazing bright room (door opens illuminous).

P13.67

inside a green house full of plants and flowers.

P13.68

She takes off some old leaves from a plant,

P13.69

talking and stroking a flower that bears fruit. She

P13.70

picks a tomato

P13.71

eating it instantly.

P13.72

Big Fish is entering the Green House

P13.73

and Ping gives him a warm hug - his face brightens up.

P13.74

Ping activates her implanted interface and her floating screen swirls up before her.

P13.75

She presses another button (closeup her arm interface) and

P13.76

the loop of Azrael slamming into the door shows up (showing AZ only from Pings Point of View without ever showing his face). Both crack-up with loud laughter for a while.

P13.77

She turns off her screen which swirls back into her arm and Big Fish gives her another hug. They leave the green house.

P13.78

Ping quite happy, sits down on something in the greenhouse and reactivates the screen.

P13.79

Pulling out another stored typography loop (closeup arm)

P13.80

that reads something like 'Technology You Trust', she puts it over the loop and adds her signature to it, then smiling, turns off the screen, gets up and leaves the greenhouse. (all fixed camera position)

P14.81

Leaving building

P15.82

On the streets again, she re-uses another old poster to plop in her new made loop of Azreal running into the door. (optional spray painting another one, depending on a location that would subdivide that loop into three more!!!)

P15.83

Again she cracks up about it, and moves off down the street,

P16.84

and entering another old building

P17.85

goes up some stairs.

P18.86

She enters her apartment/bedroom.

P18.87

and turns on her walls by way of an old lightswitch which makes very white bright glowing light and

P18.88

through her activated interface (by this time we don´t explain in detail how she turns it on anymore just hold up left arm in front of her) she chooses a calm nightly loop. We see her fall into bed and

P18.89

close her eyes.

Az's point of view

A28.20&21

Everyone splits off in different directions (camera runs with Az).

A28.22

There are shots of him jumping over railings and walls (and the camera).

A7.23

Then approaching the sliding door, (below Ping P7.50).

A7.24

runs into the door a number of times.

A7.25&26&27

He hits and kicks the door - (hammers on it. Various closeups of his feet kicking the door hands hammering on it etc).

A7.28

(closeup of face turning upward - Noticing Ping laughing

A7.29

tiefe camera az im vordergrund ping auf dach - he pauses giving her a furious look, then concentrated look onto his arm.

A7.30

halbnahe - checks his tracker (him looking at his arm)

A7.31

nahe - (which suggests new preprogrammed route)

A7.32

totale/halbtotale - and runs off into the direction he come from

A29.33

He runs really fast, (steadycam camera running behind him through a longer street) pushing himself really hard.

A29.34

Sweaty head,

A29.35&36&37

Running feet, wall, jumping,

A29.38

sweating, frowning and looking concerned.

A29.39G

We see on the tracker that he overtakes two other runners (graphical overlay over the normal picture) but

A30.40

when he reaches the finish line he just looses to the first runner coming in in front of him.

A30.41

People on the sidewalk are cheering and

A30.42

the other runners come through as well. #

A30.42

The winner is celebrating with the cheering people and

A30.43

Azrael just gets a certificate from the registrar, who shakes his hand and gives him his bag.

A30.44

With head hanging, he slowly moves away from the after race celebration.

A31.45

unhappily walking through a street he had just run through, he stumbles over an obstacle he was raving over through the race.

A31.46

He arrives at a spot on the river - perhaps an old long-abandoned port facility.

In the background - is a torn up umbrella - Az reaches for his water bottle.

A31.47

then lights a fire in barrel, or such like, with a futuristic looking lighter and

A31.48

closeup - pulls some corn out of his bag

A31.49

closeup - which he puts on sticks

A31.50

totale - and holds over the fire

A31.51

gesicht im feuerschein nahe - Looking defeated, wistful and deflated,

A31.52

nahe - he eats some corn, then

A31.53

totale - gets up and leaves.

A32.54

He heads off home through the streets, walking past the loop Ping made of him (P15.82) running into the door.

A32.55

closeup face - looked dazzledbazzled

A32.56

closeup arm - He types "Ping" into the tracker search function and the tracker immediately blinks up with Ping's location.

A32.57&58

halbnahe und close he furiously rips chip off wall,

A32.59

close face - looking pissed-off, and

A32.60

halbtotale - sets off at a run out down the street.

A32.61(G)

His tracker guides him to her house.

A33.62

He pulls open door and enters

A33.63

runs up the stairs and

A33.64

bangs on her door.

Big Fish's point of view

B37.18

He shuts off his screen with a hand movement on the table and

B37.19

Totale - getting up,

B37.20

Totale andere Richtung - moves to a different desk,

B38.21&22&23

halbnahe Nahe Closeup - where he takes some earth from a bucket with a Spoon, and fills some small plant containers.

B38.24&25&26

halbnahe Nahe Closeup - He takes a sprouted seed and puts it into a container.

B38.27 optional

- then takes his pen, puts it in a liquid storage container that sits next to the plants and

B38.28 optional

closeup - puts a drop of nanostuff into a different container with earth in - and instantly a sprout grows.

B38.29

He puts the pen in a different container and

B38.30

putting a drop on some already sprouted seeds (they would glitter in the artificial lights and start growing a bit visually (optional definately).

B11.31

He turns around as he hears a knock on the door -

B38.32

Ping puts head round the door, saying 'Hi', closesing the door again.

B38.33

halb nah - Big Fish finishes putting more drops of liquid on more sprouted seeds and

B38.34

totaler then grabbing a baby plant, goes out the door.

B13.35/72

Entering the Green House

B13.36/73

he gives Ping the baby plant that he took. -

B13.74-77

She smiles and puts it into 'her corner'. Ping then shows Big fish the loop of Azrael running into the door again. They laugh. He says goodbye to Ping and

B13.35

leaving the greenhouse (opening door and stepping out

B39.36

tür halbnah - enters his laboratory.

B39.37

nah - Pleased at seeing Ping, he takes a Bottle of Wine from a shelf from between his laboratory equipment

B39.38

totale - and places it on a small table near a comfortable chair.

B39.39

halb nahe - He goes over to a jar and

B39.40

nah - puts his nanobot pen in which fills up, then

B39.40.b

halbnah - puts the pen into its holding place.

B39.41

total - He goes to the small bookshelf and

B39.42

nah picks out a book from Christopher G. Langton "Computation at the Edge of Chaos"

B39.42

nah über schulter (buch cover von oben - (which he quickly turns in his hand (as if to glance over it briefly)

B39.43

totale - He sits down in the chair,

B39.44

nahe/halbnahe pours some wine into a glass, then

B39.45

halb nahe takes the pen out of its holding place

B39.46

nahe letting the nanobots into the wine.

B39.47

Taking a sip, he opens the book -

B39.48

We see his face reading, and then he closes his eyes and falls asleep, tired from his long night.

B39.49

He enters a lucid dream where

B39.50(G)

the Game of Life appears, and slowly morphs into a pixalated face. Cut black out.

Act 4

Pings and Azraels point of view

P18.90

closeup - Pings gets woken up by a knock on the door and

P18.91

kind of sleepwalks over to the door, and dreamingly opens it.

PA18.92

Halbtotale -The enraged Azrael pushes in and

PA18.93

Totale mit zweite Kamera Näher dran - they have a quite violent fight.

PA18.94

Somehow her eyes get covered (by t-shirt being pulled) and she freaks out and

PA18.95

closeuop - pulls out a small spraycan of sleeping potion from her pocket and

PA18.96

closeup - sprays it into his face.

PA18.97

halbnahe He falters and immediately falls asleep.

PA18.98

Totale - Feeling a bit sorry she drags him over to her bed and

PA18.99

halbnahe - puts some liquid on his mouth that comes from the same bottle that she still has in her hand (other end perhaps).

PA18.100

closeup - A little while later he wakes up (open eyes) and she is looking at him.

He opens his eyes blinking, with a knocked out feeling. They both sit there and look at each other for a brief moment.

PA18.101

totale - He stands up and she invites him with a gesture, to a table that's in front of a wall.

PA19.102

Totale. zweite/dritte Camera capture facial expressions in close up- They sit down and converse. Converstation sequence with scripted words on the wall...

  • Az: "I lost the race because of you!"
  • Ping: "Why me?"
  • Az: "You were fucking around with those doors!"

Az pulls out of his pant's pocket the chip he grabbed from her installation and gives it to Ping. She plugs it into a prepared spot on her wall in the middle of the table and it shows Az running into the door.

  • Az: "Who if not you?"

The moment she shrugs somethings happens - A binary code rifts through the loop - "IT WAS ME!!!!" (un-readable as in binary)

They both look really puzzled.

She has a brainwave then

PA19.103

closeup on pings arm - turns on her implanted interface .

PA19.104

wieder totale - She looks through her recording database (bits of loops played fast backward) are played on the wall. Finally she finds the point where she recorded the installation from the beginning of the film (butterfly loop) with the code appearing shortly.

PA19.105

Camera über schulter von Ping - Ping turns on her floating nano-screen. She puts in the binary code over her arm interface (that just morphed) pushed 'enter', and it translated into ASCII characters that spell out "LIFE" and "IT WAS ME!!!!". We see Az look puzzled behind the screen.

PA19.106

Wieder Totale mit Tisch und Wand -

  • Azrael: "Lets Go see Professor Big Fish and ask whats going on!"
  • Ping: "Big Fish? You know him?"

Azrael nods.

Both looking puzzled again.

  • Ping : "OK, good idea!"

nodding, they get up and leave.

Big Fish's point of view

B40.51

closup face - Sweaty and tired Big Fish wakes up from his lucid dream.

B40.52

totale/halbtotale - Dazed he walkes to a water boiling machine that probably has been

B40.53

closeup boiling water for him the last 40 years. He turns it on (steam blubber steam)

B40.54

halbnahe - he takes a cup that he uses every day without washing it up, and put some loose tea in a tea egg, pouring water over the tea.

B40.54

fullbody - He dazes around, while the tea brews. Morning sunlight shines through some slits in the otherwise darkened lab.

B40.55

halbnahe After a while he has a couple of sips. (Steam coming from cup with sunlight behind)

Act 5

Ping, Azrael and Big Fish

PA20.107

Ping and Azrael get out of Pings Appartment and

PA20.108

walk along a street, then

PA21.109

enter the house of Big Fish Laboratory, going

PA21.110

up the stairs and


PA21.111

knock on the door.

PAB21.112

Big Fish opens the door from inside and looks shocked, surprised, then happy to see them together visiting him. Ping just waves her hand as to say "its a long story so don´t even ask". Then Big Fish invites them in.

PAB21.113

They sit down around the Laboratory table where the black eye experiment is still present.

PAB21.114

closeup,Ping turns on her interfaces.

PAB21.115

halbtotale tisch - She shows Big Fish the loops she recorded with the binary code in them.

PAB21.116

halbnahe tisch Ping und Big Fish - She gives him the chips.

Big Fish takes the chips, swivels around his creaky old office chair that's seen better days and rolls over to his workbench.

PAB21.117

Azrael and Ping wonder around in the laboratory (in the background) while Big Fish takes the Chips and puts them on a plate that has wires coming out in all directions.

PAB21.118

Some circuitry visuals etc cutting in.

PAB21.119

the plate starts to glow a little.

PAB21.119

Suddenly the power cuts out. Picture black for some time, then we see some strange-looking floating nano-lights brightning up the room, floating off Big Fishs hands. (He pulled them out his pant pocket in the darkness and activated them).

PAB21.120&121&122

facial closeups - The all look a little terrorized and puzzled.

PAB21.123

Big Fish crouches under a table and fiddles with something looking like an old school generator or such. The power comes back on, visible by the screens all in 're-set' mode and the lights flickering back on.

PAB21.124

Big Fish looks terrified at the plate where

PAB21.125

we see black plastic drops smoldering - the chips are fried because of the power cut.

PAB21.126

All three look disappointed.

PAB21.127

closeup Pings face - Ping has another Brainwave blink blink

PAB21.128

halbtotale - she shows with her hands, the sliding doors movement (in the background we see the Azrael runs into door clip as a second layer overlay).

The other two nod.

They all leave the room.

PAB22.129

Go out of the building

PAB23.130

along a street where there is the butterfly installation of ping (the very first one). When they walk by it, it changes quickly(what and how to be figured out in postproduction) showing Kalkins presence.

PAB24.131

The turn into the familiar alleyway and come to the sliding door.

PAB24.132

They get closer to the door and

PAB24.133

halbnahe - Big Fish places a sensor by it.

PAB24.134

When they move away from the door it strangely opens and closes on its own.

PAB24.135

They all look amazed and puzzled. Big Fish goes and picks up the sensor. They all leave the scene with the door closed.

Ending

PAB25.136

They enter a Commons Room (bar, meeting place or such maybe open air) and go over to a big bowl of home-made cider

PAB25.137

closeup of one of them pouring the liquid into a glass from the big barrel in the middle of the place

PAB25.138&139&140&141

observation am tisch aus verschiedenen perspektiven - and laugh, talk and play stupid little table games until the sun sets.

PAB25.142

They then get up and say farewell to each other and leave the place going in different directions.

Ping's point of view

P26.143

Ping goes through two familiar streets

P26.144

back to the park from the beginning, which shimmers in the moonlight.

P26.145

halbnahe ping sitzens - Ping sits down and looks at the stars. (Maybe she smokes again). We see her sitting there in amazement looking at a star (open mouthed, really amazed and happy). After a while she scratches her head.

P26.146

closeup - She turns on her interface and

P26.147

halbnahe - floating screen for a last time rewinds what she has just seen and there the stars are forming into a butterfly which flies off into the black universe. Her eyes widen....................

Az's point of view

A34.65

On his way home (walking along one two streets that are familar)

A34.66

closeup Arm - Azrael checks his tracker to see the way home (he is still not familiar with his surroundings)

A35.67

when he looks, he notices a different part where the park is located, glowing strangely, then the map picture disintegrates leaving just a message on his screen saying "Network Busy"..........................

Big Fish's point of view

B41.56

Big Fish back enters his laboratory

B41.57

and puts the analysing sensor from the door on the chip analysing plate.

B41.58

One of his floating screens shows a vast network of connections pulsating rythymicly and organicly like a brainscan. He turns to the other floating screen, and calls a hacker guy tim on the webcam.

B41.59

Saying 'hi' and visually asking him a question, he sends the data (a 'sending' message is on top of the pulsating picture).

B41.60

Tim looks at it, shrugs, shakes his head and sends him two other files (indicated by a "file sending 1/2 2/2 flashing on the screen within moments).

B41.61

The picture fades-in, firstly showing a connection from one computer to the door - when normally a person would remotely control the door (typo overlay: normal remote control connection),

B41.62

then secondly a disguised connection (typo: disguised connection) showing multiple connections ending at the doorpoint but still a mere fraction of what has been going on on Big Fish's picture.

B41.63

Big Fish nods, shaken and deep in thought. He raises hands to say thanks, switches off connection to hacker and looks to the screen with the connection analysis.

B41.64

Cut back to Big Fish Face close up frowning and thinking - Big Fishs End.

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